Tutorial Movement Orders 2/2
1st paragraph, 4th line:
"and, of course, the units itself."
Should be:
"and, of course, the units themselves."
Else:
"and, of course, the unit itself."
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Tutorial Regiments
1st paragraph:
"Lets begin at the lowest level: Companies (or squadrons for cavalry, the name differs, but we are talking the same entity size here, 100 to 200 men)."
Better would be:
"Regiments are made of Companies, comprising 100 to 200 men. For Cavalry a "Company-sized" unit is instead called a "Squadron."
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Tutorial Command Points 3/3
1st para 2nd Line:
"if the general don't command a unit"
Should be:
"if the general doesn't command a unit"
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Tutorial Brigades 2
1st para 1st line:
"To the left to the Unit Panel"
Should be:
"To the left of the Unit Panel"
ADDIT: actually though, I think it really should be:
"To the right of the Unit Panel"
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Tutorial Brigades 2
2nd para 1st line:
"a soldier before a tent"
Should be:
"a soldier in front of a tent"
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Tutorial Armies 2/3
1st para 6th line:
"rippling problems among the nation"
Should be:
"rippling problems in the nation"
or:
"rippling problems among the generals and in the nation as a whole (reduced National Morale)"
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Tutorial - Generals: Skills
1st para 3rd & 4th lines:
"the Elements Panel is left of the Units Panel"
I think this should say:
"the Elements Panel is to the right of the Units Panel"
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That was a good first pass. Great tutorial!
I'll stop ADDITing to this post and if I find any others I'll post them in subsequent posts.